Another snippet

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It was bound to go wrong. When you cause so much grief, some of that destruction is bound to come back to you. It didn’t take too long. During a mission, the strong current made him drift further into enemy territory. His parachute opened too late and he hit the ground, hard. Never in his life had he experienced such pain. Nine broken ribs, a skull fracture and no rescue. It took him nine days to reach friendly territory, only his promise to her gave him the energy to keep going. When he limped out of the dessert, his uniform was stained with more than just his blood.

Comments

[callista1159.livejournal.com]

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poor jack! hmm i'm fascinated by these backstories... this looks very promising, and i think you have the ability to do it justice.

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I'm a bit wary about backstories. I'm making a whole lot of assumptions and I'm scared I'll write something that will be proven to go against canon. However, my muse is being insistent about this. I'm leaving a lot open, I'm not using one name in this so it can be read as non SG. However, the history is Jack's, without a doubt. I do hope I can do him justice. It's looking pretty dark at the moment.

*knuffels* Thank you so much!

[callista1159.livejournal.com]

you've obviously put a lot of thought into this, so i don't think you could ever be accused of being gratuitous - even if it eventually goes non-canon (which i'm not sure it will be - they've kinda given up on jack's backstory these days, as far as i know) - it'll still has some validity...

of course, you'll have a bit more license if you don't use names, but i wouldn't be afraid to if that's how the story falls :)

can't wait to see the rest!

[woodface]

We don't know very much about Jack's past, if not nothing. A bit sad though, we know Daiel's parents died. Sam's mother died in a car accident, her dad had a fall out with her brother. We know nothing about Jack. Well we do about his marriage and some previous missions but not his parents. Guess my muse is tired of it ;o)

Teal'c obviously doesn't have parents. *grins*

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AH damn, of course. Teal'c's dad got killed! Oops forgot. Hmm, see we even know more about Teal'c!

[woodface]

Awwwwwww *blushes furiously*

Thank you, hon *knuffels*

[deltachild.livejournal.com]

*bounces*

*gives you a whole truck load of pills*

You. Must. Write. More. *g*

I adore backstories, esp if they're about Jack. Go with it!

[woodface]

You trying to give me an overdose? ;o)

Hee, thanks! I'll try to get it finished. Am right now working on a beta to a fluff fic though.

[deltachild.livejournal.com]

Oh fluff!

Fluff is good ;)

[woodface]

AH, you'll love it then. It's fluffity fluff fluff

[deltachild.livejournal.com]

D'aw :D

[nhawk.livejournal.com]

Ooh, a new bit {bounce} It's still going strong, sweet. :)

[woodface]

Hee, thanks munchkin. I have more ;o)