Another snippet
Nov. 7th, 2003 05:11 pmIt was bound to go wrong. When you cause so much grief, some of that destruction is bound to come back to you. It didn’t take too long. During a mission, the strong current made him drift further into enemy territory. His parachute opened too late and he hit the ground, hard. Never in his life had he experienced such pain. Nine broken ribs, a skull fracture and no rescue. It took him nine days to reach friendly territory, only his promise to her gave him the energy to keep going. When he limped out of the dessert, his uniform was stained with more than just his blood.
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Date: 2003-11-07 08:19 am (UTC)poor jack! hmm i'm fascinated by these backstories... this looks very promising, and i think you have the ability to do it justice.
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Date: 2003-11-07 08:37 am (UTC)*knuffels* Thank you so much!
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Date: 2003-11-07 08:40 am (UTC)of course, you'll have a bit more license if you don't use names, but i wouldn't be afraid to if that's how the story falls :)
can't wait to see the rest!
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Date: 2003-11-07 09:09 am (UTC)Teal'c obviously doesn't have parents. *grins*
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Date: 2003-11-07 09:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-07 08:34 am (UTC)Thank you, hon *knuffels*
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Date: 2003-11-07 10:49 am (UTC)*gives you a whole truck load of pills*
You. Must. Write. More. *g*
I adore backstories, esp if they're about Jack. Go with it!
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Date: 2003-11-07 11:00 am (UTC)Hee, thanks! I'll try to get it finished. Am right now working on a beta to a fluff fic though.
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Date: 2003-11-07 11:19 am (UTC)Fluff is good ;)
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